HW 49 - Comments on Best of Your Break HW

Please solicit feedback from the other members of your thinking/writing group, your mentor, and your protege regarding the break HW assignment you think you did best. Copy and paste the comments you make for your t/w groups and then a dashed line and the comments you received as HW 49. Bold the title of the post from break that you want others to comment on.

Please send mentors and proteges a link to the direct post you want them to comment on. Please also send them a specific request for feedback ("the idea in paragraph 2, the metaphor in paragraph 3", etc).

Due Monday May 2 at 8:30am.

MAY 2011 NiW Thinking/Writing (T/W) Groups

• 1 - Mortician Diaries - Allwyn Brendan Ariel Jessica Ruben
• 2 - Mortician Diaries- Alex -Stephen Lora Jin Beatrice
• 3 - Mortician Diaries -Amon -Dima -Ean -Leticia -Besmir
• 4 - Mortician Diaries -Cecil Willie Chris Richard Mathew S
• 5 - Grave Matters -Jessica R. Abe Yuuki David Luz
• 6 - Grave Matters -Bryanna Kristen Brandon Ally
• 7 - Grave Matters -Anthony Felipe Rigel Sarah
• 8 - Grave Matters -Jayson Amber Jared Lina
• 9 Grave Matters -Johnny Abdullah Sarah Christian
• 10 - Grave Matters -Rossi Max Larche Jay
• 11 - Grave Matters -Tamiko Omar Dean Harry
• 12 - Curtains - Michelle Evan Stephanie
• 13 - Curtains -Arden Sharif Mathew B
• 14 - Curtains -Leah Bianca Abdul
• 15 - Curtains -Jasper Amanda Javon
• 16 - Stiff - John Lucas Elizabeth
• 17 - Stiff - Chris Sophia Amhara
• 18 - Stiff -Raven Ben Megumi
• 19 - Stiff - Eloise Naima Devin Nina
• 20 - American Way of Death Revisited - Sam Amber Kevin Martyna K
• 21 - American Way of Death Revisited - Natalie Sarah L. Casey